Sunday, August 30, 2009

The first gray hair


The foliage has been losing its freshness through the month of August, and here and there a yellow leaf shows itself like the first gray hair amidst the locks of a beauty who has seen one season too many.

Oliver Wendell Holmes

Today it is cool and cloudy, the garden is getting overgrown, the Shaker heirloom tomatoes are slowing ripening, pumpkins are turning orange and my favorite season is approaching. I feel giddy thinking about it. I know that I will be visiting Vermont, Massachusetts and Connecticut this fall. And New England is, without a doubt, at its best in autumn. Lots of editing work to do...enjoy your Sunday!

Lovingly,
The Writing Nag

Saturday, August 29, 2009

Ink Smears-The Poem

While I wait for my computer to update
as it wants, craves
the newest version, the latest release

I test myself with the ancient tools
pen and paper
far away from the silent keys
of my keyboard

keys that are not really silent
that make a click-click-click if you type really fast
and if you are in a hurry and hit the wrong key
they ring an ancient typewriter bell
the ding! when you finally arrived at the end of the row
and you grasped the carriage return lever
pulling or was it pushing?
with much authority
and a strong feeling of accomplishment
pulling or pushing hard
to the next row
hard
as if to say
look at me...I just typed a line
something I rarely feel with my silent keys
or my pen and paper
paper is silent
and ink smears



Now get back to work!
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag

Friday, August 28, 2009

Every Day at Least

One ought, every day at least, to hear a little song, read a good poem, see a fine picture, and if it were possible, to speak a few reasonable words.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

Thursday, August 27, 2009

Cooking is love

Cooking is like love. It should be entered into with abandon or not at all.
Harriet Van Horne


I saw Julie & Julia last night. I'm pretty sure I had a goofy smile on my face throughout the movie. It was charming, sweet, funny and very clever how Ephron seamlessly wove the story together of two very different but both talented women. One of my prized possessions is my signed Julia Child cookbook but I didn't know very much about her life in Paris and now after seeing the movie I want to read more. Ephron based the "Julia" story on Julia Child's book, My Life in France.

I was surprised how much my husband also liked the movie. But as a Cordon Bleu trained chef, he was also highly influenced by French cooking and Julia's show. The first recipes I ever made were French petit fours, French onion soup and boeuf Bourguignon.

I just read that Julia's cookbook Mastering the Art of French Cooking, Vol. 2 is again #1 on the Times Bestsellers List. Congrats to Julie Powell for helping to bring this American icon to the screen. Maybe it will inspire a whole new generation of people to cook.


Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Do You Have The Guts for This?

Talent is helpful in writing, but guts are absolutely necessary.
Jessamyn West


If you've starting submitting this month you may feel fear that you're not ready, your work is not good enough; there are so many better writers out there.

Persevere in spite of all that.

Everyday that you write you are becoming a better writer.

There are many successful writers today that would be the first to admit that they are not the most talented.

What did they do different? Didn't give up, didn't listen to those negative voices in their head, kept writing in spite of people telling them they didn't have what it took to be a writer. This morning in one of my newsletters I was reminded of this. Jack London received 600 rejections before he sold his first story.Six hundred!That is believing in yourself and your work.


Now get back to work!

Lovingly,
The Writing Nag

Ink Smears

Ink smears, as thoughts sometimes do.
Emme Woodhull-Bäche

I went to Florence, Colorado yesterday to scour the antique shops for postcards and paper. I can't scan anything right now because my scanner is broken again. I found a few good cards and some interesting turn of the century illustrations. If anyone could recommend a good scanner I'm listening because my HP has been a source of frustration the last two years.

I love the above quote and thought that "ink smears" would be a great prompt today. Start a freewriting exercise with thoughts on these two words "ink smears" or jump right in and start a poem or an essay. I'll post my poem by Friday. Now get back to work!

Lovingly,
The Writing Nag

Monday, August 24, 2009

Writing Away

“Traveling is like flirting with life. It’s like saying, ‘I would stay and love you, but I have to go; this is my station.’” Lisa St. Aubin de Teran


I always wanted to be a travel writer but when I'm traveling I'm usually enjoying myself so much that writing about the trip is the last thing on my mind. On my last trip to Paris my mother-in-law gave me a travel journal and the first few days I was religious about writing down every detail...what we ate, where we went, what I was thinking about but then the journal trails off and later I have to piece together my trip with my photographs. I picked up Writing Away by author Lavinia Spalding in hopes in would give me some insight into the travel writing process.

With 13 chapters starting with "choosing a journal and beginning your journey" the book winds it way through the creative writing process with inspirational quotes, journal prompts, recommended reading and practical tips including packing an art journal. One fun prompt that stood out is listing the alphabet in your journal and filling it in with words you encounter during the trip. Spalding writes "this will force you to scavenge for details you might otherwise not include..." I'm definitely going to try this on my next trip back east. This is a quick inspirational read that will motivate you to think about your next vacation long after you unpack your suitcase.

Just a few recommended sites.

www.writingaway.net
www.journeywoman.com
www.1001journals.com
www.travelerstales.com
www.bootsnall.com

Today, using a photo from a past vacation as inspiration ; write a fiction or non-fiction journal entry trying to recall every detail about the place. Now get back to work!

Lovingly,
The Writing Nag

Saturday, August 22, 2009

Give a girl an education


Give a girl an education and introduce her properly into the world, and ten to one but she has the means of settling well, without further expense to anybody. Jane Austen


School has started for most of the students in Colorado Springs but I still have about six weeks before I start the next semester. I'm behind in all of my creative works because I've been concentrating on the work that pays the bills. Finding a balance can be difficult, I know that if I work hard on my part-time freelance work I will have the reward of a paycheck and life will be a little easier but in the back of my mind...I want to write poetry and put together a chapbook. Letting too many days go by without writing creatively can also make it harder to get back to the habit. I took a health class once and the teacher stressed that missing too many days of exercise can make it harder to get back to the health habit. Her rule was don't go more than 3 days without doing some sort of exercise, even if its 10 sit ups while you're watching TV. I think of her rule when I've missed too many writing days. I know it's easy to say you don't have time but continue to flex your writing muscle even if its 10 sentences in your notebook when you're watching TV. Today's prompt might help.

Inspired by Bonni Goldberg's Room to Write:
You have permission to write an entire page of junk. Get it all out there, no one needs to see it but you. Warm up your writing muscle just getting words on the page, they don't need to make sense. As Colette writes: "You will do foolish things but do them with enthusiasm." Now get back to work!

Lovingly,
The Writing Nag

Friday, August 21, 2009

The Difference between a writer and an author

Sit down, and put down everything that comes into your head and then you're a writer. But an author is one who can judge his own stuff's worth, without pity, and destroy most of it.
Colette, Casual Chance, 1964




Thursday, August 20, 2009

Getting Down to the Writing Business

Thanks to my cousin for this link from the Irish Times.

Food Lust-Writing About Food

This post is one I wrote almost a year and a half ago but I'm in summer reruns today trying to finish a big editing project. The meal is brunch on my patio, made by my husband on a lovely sunny summer Sunday. How's that for alliteration? Enjoy!


"The primary requisite for writing well about food is a good appetite."
A. J. Liebling


This week in my poetry critique group we are writing poems about food lust. That undeniable connection that has people connecting to others over the love of a certain food. I realize there are people that just eat, like I drink water, just because if you didn't you would die. Then there are my friends and family...we can talk for hours about the way a certain place in Boston makes garlic pizza, or the whole belly clam chowder at that place on the coast, or the mango custard at our favorite Indian restaurant. That last one inspired my poem this week. Blind Date with Mango Custard. I'm submitting it several places this weekend. Not only do I like to read cookbooks before I go to bed but I also like to read fiction that has a food element. And if writers do it well it's pretty great.

One of the first ones to do this was Diane Mott Davidson, her latest book Sweet Revenge (Goldy Culinary Mystery, Book 14) The reason her books work so well, she worked and trained with a caterer and she makes it clear to her readers she knows her food stuff.Now there are hundreds of other authors who write this way but not all necessarily very well. As a chef, I want my food themed fiction book to be realistic but not lose readers over the technical stuff...a delicate balance.
Today pick one food and write about it. It could be a natural food, a persimmon or a slice of aged Cheddar or your favorite junk food. Maybe a family favorite recipe. Could you convey to your reader that you are above all passionate about this food? Some food publications to explore.

Alimentum
Gastronomica
Saveur
Now get back to work!

Lovingly and now hungry,
The Writing Nag

Wednesday, August 19, 2009

I am writing in the garden...

This is my garden last summer with lots of beautiful dahlias. My garden looks very different every year!

I am writing in the garden. To write as one should of a garden one must write not outside it or merely somewhere near it, but in the garden. Frances Hodgson Burnett



Frances Hodgson Burnett, playright and author of romance novels but best known for her children's books including The Secret Garden, A Little Princess and Little Lord Fauntleroy, reminds writers that we need to immerse ourselves in setting to write setting well. The passage in the Secret Garden where Mary discovers the beauty of the garden is well etched into my mind because of Mrs. Burnett's skill as an author. That part of the novel is true she really did discover a secret garden. How do you integrate setting into your manuscript or stories to move the plot forward?


Mantis Garden Products

Today read Creating The Perfect Setting and make your own list of what a perfect setting is for you.Now get back to work!

Lovingly,
The Writing Nag

Another View of the Butterfly


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Originally uploaded by cocoaberg25

I've never seen this type of butterfly in my garden so I have to research Colorado butterflies.

Tuesday, August 18, 2009

Folks Festival- Lyons, Colorado


A good style should show no signs of effort. What is written should seem a happy accident. ~W. Somerset Maugham, Summing Up, 1938

Sunday I spent all day in Lyons, Colorado at the 19th Annual Rocky Mountain Folks Festival. The festival was all weekend but I can't seem to ever get that much time off...so instead we picked Sunday...highlights of the day.

Brett Dennen Aint No Reason, Gillian Welch, Blind Pilot, M. Ward, and the Tibetan Drepung monks who also led a meditation during the day. The festival is located about 15 miles north of Boulder and is one of the best run music festivals I've ever been too.


After being away 18 hours I am tired, sunburned and I need another day off but watching these creative people living their dream was pretty amazing.

For more info about The Songwriting School.


Lovingly,
The Writing Nag

Ready for a Swiss vacation?

I'm still waiting to hear from Switzerland's tourism site, My Switzerland; they have yet to take me up on my blogging offer. I have offered to fly to Switzerland and blog about each of their Swiss travel packages that they call "Swiss gems" if they just pay for it. I haven't heard back from them yet...but they did allow me to write more about their attractive packages that would appeal to every creative traveler. If they did allow me to blog about these fun Swiss trips, my offer is still valid... the following would be my top five picks.

For a writer who also loves history and paper my first pick would be a class in medieval paper-making. This is offered in Basel at an old paper mill. Historical printing presses, workshops, and the chance to make your own colored paper are offered in the historic mill.

My next stop would be a horse drawn carriage ride through Lucerne which also includes gourmet food. I'd take my sister on this trip because we both love tours and it includes one of her favorite foods, cheese. Cheese fondue and Raclette. If you've never had Raclette (meaning scraped) it's a delicious melted cheese dish usually served with potatoes, gherkins and pickled onions. Eating this indigenous food in the city of lights is an experience that shouldn't be missed.

My third pick would be a ghost walk through Zurich. Not only does this trip offer you the dark, spooky history of the famous Swiss city but it also offers a unique adventure for those who love ghost stories. If you write horror or suspense this could be the gem for you!


My fourth pick is for my husband. He would really enjoy discovering the wine country of Switzerland in the "day in the vineyard" tour. Guests can participate in the autumn harvest and share a communal lunch with all the workers. Taste the wines of Switzerland that make the cheese fondue so delicious.
My last pick was a difficult decision, there is musical box making, river rafting, the cog railway, a day in the dairy, herb gathering and many more adventures in Switzerland but for me I would wind down my Swiss vacation with a historic hotel tour complete with a gourmet seven course meal with seven fine Swiss wines. What better way to end the day? I'm sure that chocolate is part of the last course.

These are just my top five picks what would yours be? I'll let you know when I get the email to Discover Swiss "Pearls" if anyone would like to join me on a creatively inspired vacation to Switzerland...my bags are already packed.

Lovingly,
The soon to be traveling to Switzerland Nag ; )

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Drepung Monks


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Originally uploaded by cocoaberg25

The Drepung Monks started Sunday morning of the festival with the sacred music of Tibetan temple music. The multiphonic singing is called jok-kay (low tone) and bar-da (high tone). They have been featured on the soundtrack of Seven Years in Tibet. They have also performed with Paul Simon, Sheryl Crow and Michael Stipe, just to name a few. An outstanding performance. They also were kind enough to lead a guided meditation later that evening.

August 2009 Garden Visitor


August 2009 Garden Visitor
Originally uploaded by cocoaberg25

Friday, August 14, 2009

Doing Your Duty Without Pain

Do something every day that you don't want to do; this is the golden rule for acquiring the habit of doing your duty without pain.
Mark Twain

What will you do today that you don't want to do? I just procrastinated doing by editing work for two hours and now it's time for my other job. I keep thinking I will outgrow this habit, but apparently not. Mark Twain seems to have the best quotes on writing.

Thursday, August 13, 2009

Health Insurance Reform

All I'm ever going to say about health insurance.

More Garden Pics

Double ruffled cosmos came back from last year.

Early pumpkin harvest.
A hedge of marigolds, I didn't plant one marigold seed in the last five years.
More beautiful zinnias.

Three Rules of Work & Three Reasons for Failure

"Three Rules of Work: Out of clutter find simplicity: from discord find harmony: In the middle of difficulty lies opportunity."
Albert Einstein

Even though I had hours of editing work in front of me I decided to take the time yesterday afternoon and wade through my piles of paper and do a thorough cleaning of my office. My husband moved around some bookcases so that my office had better flow and I spent three hours going through paperwork, filing, shredding, organizing and getting rid of things I no longer have any use for. My usual method of moving piles of paper to other piles of paper was no longer working for me. I will be adding a lot more books to Book Mooch by the weekend. Walking into the office this morning there is a sense of calm instead of chaos. There are many decluttering/organizing books on the market and I have read many of them but I think you have to figure out what works for you. Knowing that all my mail and paperwork is taken care of and papers are filed lets me do the creative writing with a clear head...there isn't the nagging feeling of "shouldn't I be doing something else?"

On that note I found an excerpt on writing from Annie Dillard's book The Writing Life in the middle of one of my paper volcano's Annie writes:

"When you write, you lay out a line of words. The line of words is a miner's pick, a woodcarver's gouge, a surgeon's probe. You wield it, and it digs a path you follow. Soon you find yourself deep in new territory. Is it a dead end, or have you located the real subject? You will know tomorrow, or this time next year."

When do you know your writing is ready? When can it stand on its own. Dillard reminds the writer that "The written word is weak. Many people prefer life to it...this writing that you do, that so thrills you, that so rocks and exhilarates you, as if you were dancing next to the band, is barely audible to anyone else."

I think I will have to read the rest of this book to see where she is going with this but in the rest of the paragraph she suggests that readers need time to hear the subtle music of writing. We are going from our life which is loud and demanding to mere words on a page. Readers need time to get to this other silent world the writer creates. Perhaps this references the craft of writing, the fine detail work necessary so that the readers can hear music in your words. In a previous paragraph she goes on to say about editing, "The reason not to perfect a work as it progresses is that, concomitantly, original work fashions a form the true shape of which it discovers only as it proceeds, so the early strokes are useless, however fine their sheen." A reminder not to edit as you write but to write and perhaps let it sit, going back to it when your entire work is complete.

Words I needed to hear, but they were lost in the midst of the clutter.

Today, ask yourself what prevents you from having a peaceful writing space? What can you do to clear the way for a successful creative writing month? In Noah St. John's book Permission to Succeed, St. John writes there are only "three reasons for all human failure...fear, ignorance and entropy." What obstacles if any are blocking your path to success? He writes that "Success is natural, because life really wants and actually needs us to succeed." Now get back to work!

Lovingly,
The Writing Nag




Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Breathings of your heart

Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart.
William Wordsworth


The more you are able to shift into new modes, styles, ways of thinking...in life & in writing...the more joy, beauty & pleasure you'll be able to experience & create. Caroline Joy Adams

Now that school is over for the semester I've been able to read more for pleasure and although I'm made a small attempt to gather my work together before the next school year starts, I've really been enjoying the time to read. For those of you who have writing ready to submit, Duotrope, the free online submission directory just celebrated their 4th anniversary with an updated website. While it is free they depend on donations so if you have found some great places you wouldn't have found on your own, consider donating to keep them online.

A notable book this week.

William Zinsser who is probably best known for his classic non-fiction craft writing book On Writing Well, 30th Anniversary Edition: The Classic Guide to Writing Nonfiction has a new book out, a biography called Writing Places The Life Journey of a Writer and a Teacher.

Now get back to work!
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag


Saturday, August 8, 2009

How to Play?

"I still get wildly enthusiastic about little things...I play with leaves. I skip down the street and run against the wind." Leo Buscaglia

I woke up late this morning...lay in bed and flipped through the Saturday morning children's programs and then I saw a public service announcement that urged kids to check out their website and find out how to play? Isn't the whole purpose of play not to have rules? Didn't you play by using your imagination, running wild down the street or in the playground, inventing games and stories, making up fun things to do with your friends that were different than the day before? I found it a little bit sad that with many schools cutting recess and physical education our society has to remind kids to get out there and play...and oh, by the way this is what play is. In sociology class many years ago my professor has us take games to public places and see if people would join in. At first it was awkward setting up games in the middle of a busy mall but as adults started to join in, there was laughter, surprise and fun...until we got kicked out of the mall for playing Twister in public. My professor believed that adults should never lose the ability or desire to play. And as we get older we usually forget how. Work takes over and play is a planned-far-in-advance summer vacation or something that a corporation organizes to build teamwork.


Today, think about what makes you "wildly enthusiastic" and write a scene where a character just plays. How does playing change your character? Playing increases creativity because it helps us let go of all of the rules. How would your writing change if you ignored the rules and just played with words? Now get back to work! (or take the day off and just play)

Lovingly,
The Writing Nag

Friday, August 7, 2009

Free to enter poetry contest from Franklin-Christoph

Fee-free contest with great prizes!

Don't miss out on this fine pen company's poetry contest you have until November 30th.
First prize is $1000 and online publication. My friend, poet extraordinaire Yvonne Garcia won a merit award in this contest in 2007. You can read past winners on the website, the competition is tough but with no entry fee it's worth the time, gather your best work and revise, revise, revise and then submit. Now get back to work!

Lovingly,
The Writing Nag



Thursday, August 6, 2009

All the Winners' Names




An old racetrack joke reminds you that your program contains all the winners' names. I stare at my typewriter keys with the same thought.
Mignon McLaughlin, The Neurotic's Notebook, 1960

I don't know much about The neurotic's notebook other than its out of print so I haven't been able to find a reasonably priced copy. I keep thinking I'll stumble across one at a garage sale and find out what its all about. It seems to be full of very quotable quotes.

My mother reminded me yesterday that I haven't written since Monday. I thought that with school finished until October I'd have lots of free time, instead I took on another part-time job that has kept me busy. And while I still intend on gathering all my writing together before the end of the month, there is the positive reinforcement of another paycheck if I keep working, something that poetry and creative writing does not consistently provide...yet.

While I definitely need to work on my food photography, if you ever find yourself in Denver, check out Cake Crumbs...Thanks to Denon and Sean for dropping off a sampling on my front porch, early one morning! (Who doesn't love to have relatives in the bakery business.) This is one of their specialty cupcakes for the summer.

The S'more cupcake.



August Garden Pics



Morning glories grow through the table and chairs, I sat here saving seeds last summer, I'm guessing I lost a few.


This has definitely been the best summer I ever spent in Colorado, hot days and very regular afternoon showers have resulted in an amazing colorful garden this year.

Perennial sweet peas are much more sturdy with thicker stems than the annuals.

My first hibiscus tree.
I better put up the net soon or the squirrels will eat all of the Concord grapes and I want to make jelly this year.
I wish I knew the name of this flower, it has the prettiest foliage.

Monday, August 3, 2009

Writing...Just As It Should Be

Substitute "damn" every time you're inclined to write "very;" your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be. Mark Twain

Twain's not so subtle advice on not overusing adverbs in your writing is not new advice but as always Twain is cleverly reminding writers that adverbs should be used with caution.

That's not to say that contemporary writers don't overuse adverbs. This 2007 article "Deathly adverbs" offers author J.K. Rowling as an example.

And here's Grammar Rock for a reminder what is an adverb?



Whether or not you think using adverbs is "lazy writing" as many editors and craft books will tell you, it's a good idea to run your Word "find" feature for "ly" before you send in a completed piece of writing. Not that all adverbs should be banished but have you considered a stronger verb or if you are using excessive adverbs in dialogue tags, could you show that the person was angry rather than saying "Go away!" she said angrily.

Today take a look at how you use or overuse adverbs. How could you strengthen your writing by recognizing what words you overuse or fall back on? Twain continues his discussion of adverbs in this quote from Mark My Words: Mark Twain on Writing

I am dead to adverbs; they cannot excite me. To misplace an adverb is a thing which I am able to do with frozen indifference; it can never give me a pang. ... There are subtleties which I cannot master at all,--the confuse me, they mean absolutely nothing to me,--and this adverb plague is one of them. ... Yes, there are things which we cannot learn, and there is no use in fretting about it. I cannot learn adverbs; and what is more I won't.

Mark Twain "Reply to a Boston Girl," Atlantic Monthly, June 1880


Now get back to work!

Lovingly,

The Writing Nag

Sunday, August 2, 2009

Happy Birthday Cocoa!

This was Cocoa at two months...today she turned ten.

WOOF Contest Winners

WOOF Contest – Top Picks


Poetry

Zorlone – “After Thought” - A poem of regret.

Dragon Blogger – “Sweet Songs of Youth” - Poem about childhood love and innocence.

Jennifer M Scott – “Among Lilac” - A poem of decisions.


About Writing / Creative Non-Fiction / Non-Fiction

Greg Freed – “Garden Part One” - A story about a man and his dog and a question about animal ethics.




Presenting the finest of the writer’s blogs by the bloggers who write them. Highlighting the top posts as chosen by the July 24, 2009 WOOF Contest participants. Want in to join the next WOOF? The next contest ends Aug 7. Submit a link to your best writing post of the last 3 weeks using the form on this page.


Other WOOF Contestants for 07/24/09



About Writing / Creative Non-Fiction / Non-Fiction

Writing Nag – “7 Questions for Creative Writing Accountability” - Are you achieving your writing goals? Why or Why Not? Questions to ask yourself and a freewriting prompt.

Greg Freed – “What we talk about when we talk about the economy - Opens with a short essay about how we divide numbers from stories, so that it's "9.4% unemployment," not "Mr. Soandso, father for four and devoted husband for twenty years, got laid off." Moves into a narrative about how the economy is impacting my family, an attempt to reinject personal stories back into newsworthy topics.


Poetry

Jennifer M Scott – “Morning Minuet” - A poem of weird surrealism.



Saturday, August 1, 2009

August's Golden Crown

"Whilst August yet wears her golden crown,
Ripening fields lush- bright with promise;
Summer waxes long, then wanes, quietly passing
Her fading green glory on to riotous Autumn."
Michelle L. Thieme, August's Crown


Poetry Contest for Garden Writers
Thanks to Lauri for the link!




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