Sunday, August 30, 2009
The first gray hair
Saturday, August 29, 2009
Ink Smears-The Poem
as it wants, craves
the newest version, the latest release
I test myself with the ancient tools
pen and paper
far away from the silent keys
of my keyboard
keys that are not really silent
that make a click-click-click if you type really fast
and if you are in a hurry and hit the wrong key
they ring an ancient typewriter bell
the ding! when you finally arrived at the end of the row
and you grasped the carriage return lever
pulling or was it pushing?
with much authority
and a strong feeling of accomplishment
pulling or pushing hard
to the next row
hard
as if to say
look at me...I just typed a line
something I rarely feel with my silent keys
or my pen and paper
paper is silent
and ink smears

Now get back to work!
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag
Friday, August 28, 2009
Every Day at Least
- One ought, every day at least, to hear a little song, read a good poem, see a fine picture, and if it were possible, to speak a few reasonable words.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
Thursday, August 27, 2009
Cooking is love
Harriet Van Horne
I saw Julie & Julia last night. I'm pretty sure I had a goofy smile on my face throughout the movie. It was charming, sweet, funny and very clever how Ephron seamlessly wove the story together of two very different but both talented women. One of my prized possessions is my signed Julia Child cookbook but I didn't know very much about her life in Paris and now after seeing the movie I want to read more. Ephron based the "Julia" story on Julia Child's book, My Life in France
I was surprised how much my husband also liked the movie. But as a Cordon Bleu trained chef, he was also highly influenced by French cooking and Julia's show. The first recipes I ever made were French petit fours, French onion soup and boeuf Bourguignon.
I just read that Julia's cookbook Mastering the Art of French Cooking, Vol. 2
Wednesday, August 26, 2009
Do You Have The Guts for This?
Jessamyn West
If you've starting submitting this month you may feel fear that you're not ready, your work is not good enough; there are so many better writers out there.
Persevere in spite of all that.
Everyday that you write you are becoming a better writer.
There are many successful writers today that would be the first to admit that they are not the most talented.
What did they do different? Didn't give up, didn't listen to those negative voices in their head, kept writing in spite of people telling them they didn't have what it took to be a writer. This morning in one of my newsletters I was reminded of this. Jack London received 600 rejections before he sold his first story.Six hundred!That is believing in yourself and your work.
Now get back to work!
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag
Ink Smears
Emme Woodhull-Bäche
I love the above quote and thought that "ink smears" would be a great prompt today. Start a freewriting exercise with thoughts on these two words "ink smears" or jump right in and start a poem or an essay. I'll post my poem by Friday. Now get back to work!
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag
Monday, August 24, 2009
Writing Away
With 13 chapters starting with "choosing a journal and beginning your journey" the book winds it way through the creative writing process with inspirational quotes, journal prompts, recommended reading and practical tips including packing an art journal. One fun prompt that stood out is listing the alphabet in your journal and filling it in with words you encounter during the trip. Spalding writes "this will force you to scavenge for details you might otherwise not include..." I'm definitely going to try this on my next trip back east. This is a quick inspirational read that will motivate you to think about your next vacation long after you unpack your suitcase.
Just a few recommended sites.
www.writingaway.net
www.journeywoman.com
www.1001journals.com
www.travelerstales.com
www.bootsnall.com
Today, using a photo from a past vacation as inspiration ; write a fiction or non-fiction journal entry trying to recall every detail about the place. Now get back to work!
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag
Saturday, August 22, 2009
Give a girl an education

Inspired by Bonni Goldberg's Room to Write:
You have permission to write an entire page of junk. Get it all out there, no one needs to see it but you. Warm up your writing muscle just getting words on the page, they don't need to make sense. As Colette writes: "You will do foolish things but do them with enthusiasm." Now get back to work!
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag
Friday, August 21, 2009
The Difference between a writer and an author
Colette, Casual Chance, 1964
Thursday, August 20, 2009
Food Lust-Writing About Food
"The primary requisite for writing well about food is a good appetite."
A. J. Liebling
This week in my poetry critique group we are writing poems about food lust. That undeniable connection that has people connecting to others over the love of a certain food. I realize there are people that just eat, like I drink water, just because if you didn't you would die. Then there are my friends and family...we can talk for hours about the way a certain place in Boston makes garlic pizza, or the whole belly clam chowder at that place on the coast, or the mango custard at our favorite Indian restaurant. That last one inspired my poem this week. Blind Date with Mango Custard. I'm submitting it several places this weekend. Not only do I like to read cookbooks before I go to bed but I also like to read fiction that has a food element. And if writers do it well it's pretty great.
One of the first ones to do this was Diane Mott Davidson, her latest book Sweet Revenge (Goldy Culinary Mystery, Book 14)
Today pick one food and write about it. It could be a natural food, a persimmon or a slice of aged Cheddar or your favorite junk food. Maybe a family favorite recipe. Could you convey to your reader that you are above all passionate about this food? Some food publications to explore.
Alimentum
Gastronomica
Saveur
Now get back to work!
Lovingly and now hungry,
The Writing Nag
Wednesday, August 19, 2009
I am writing in the garden...

I am writing in the garden. To write as one should of a garden one must write not outside it or merely somewhere near it, but in the garden. Frances Hodgson Burnett
Frances Hodgson Burnett, playright and author of romance novels but best known for her children's books including The Secret Garden, A Little Princess and Little Lord Fauntleroy, reminds writers that we need to immerse ourselves in setting to write setting well. The passage in the Secret Garden where Mary discovers the beauty of the garden is well etched into my mind because of Mrs. Burnett's skill as an author. That part of the novel is true she really did discover a secret garden. How do you integrate setting into your manuscript or stories to move the plot forward?
Today read Creating The Perfect Setting and make your own list of what a perfect setting is for you.Now get back to work!
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag
Another View of the Butterfly

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Originally uploaded by cocoaberg25
I've never seen this type of butterfly in my garden so I have to research Colorado butterflies.
Tuesday, August 18, 2009
Folks Festival- Lyons, Colorado

Sunday I spent all day in Lyons, Colorado at the 19th Annual Rocky Mountain Folks Festival. The festival was all weekend but I can't seem to ever get that much time off...so instead we picked Sunday...highlights of the day.
Brett Dennen Aint No Reason, Gillian Welch, Blind Pilot, M. Ward, and the Tibetan Drepung monks who also led a meditation during the day. The festival is located about 15 miles north of Boulder and is one of the best run music festivals I've ever been too.
After being away 18 hours I am tired, sunburned and I need another day off but watching these creative people living their dream was pretty amazing.
For more info about The Songwriting School.
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag
Ready for a Swiss vacation?


Drepung Monks

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Originally uploaded by cocoaberg25
Friday, August 14, 2009
Doing Your Duty Without Pain
Mark Twain
What will you do today that you don't want to do? I just procrastinated doing by editing work for two hours and now it's time for my other job. I keep thinking I will outgrow this habit, but apparently not. Mark Twain seems to have the best quotes on writing.
Thursday, August 13, 2009
Three Rules of Work & Three Reasons for Failure
Albert Einstein
On that note I found an excerpt on writing from Annie Dillard's book The Writing Life in the middle of one of my paper volcano's Annie writes:
"When you write, you lay out a line of words. The line of words is a miner's pick, a woodcarver's gouge, a surgeon's probe. You wield it, and it digs a path you follow. Soon you find yourself deep in new territory. Is it a dead end, or have you located the real subject? You will know tomorrow, or this time next year."
When do you know your writing is ready? When can it stand on its own. Dillard reminds the writer that "The written word is weak. Many people prefer life to it...this writing that you do, that so thrills you, that so rocks and exhilarates you, as if you were dancing next to the band, is barely audible to anyone else."
I think I will have to read the rest of this book to see where she is going with this but in the rest of the paragraph she suggests that readers need time to hear the subtle music of writing. We are going from our life which is loud and demanding to mere words on a page. Readers need time to get to this other silent world the writer creates. Perhaps this references the craft of writing, the fine detail work necessary so that the readers can hear music in your words. In a previous paragraph she goes on to say about editing, "The reason not to perfect a work as it progresses is that, concomitantly, original work fashions a form the true shape of which it discovers only as it proceeds, so the early strokes are useless, however fine their sheen." A reminder not to edit as you write but to write and perhaps let it sit, going back to it when your entire work is complete.
Words I needed to hear, but they were lost in the midst of the clutter.
Today, ask yourself what prevents you from having a peaceful writing space? What can you do to clear the way for a successful creative writing month? In Noah St. John's book Permission to Succeed, St. John writes there are only "three reasons for all human failure...fear, ignorance and entropy." What obstacles if any are blocking your path to success? He writes that "Success is natural, because life really wants and actually needs us to succeed." Now get back to work!
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag
Wednesday, August 12, 2009
Breathings of your heart
William Wordsworth
A notable book this week.
William Zinsser who is probably best known for his classic non-fiction craft writing book On Writing Well, 30th Anniversary Edition: The Classic Guide to Writing Nonfiction has a new book out, a biography called Writing Places The Life Journey of a Writer and a Teacher.
Now get back to work!
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag
Saturday, August 8, 2009
How to Play?
My professor believed that adults should never lose the ability or desire to play. And as we get older we usually forget how. Work takes over and play is a planned-far-in-advance summer vacation or something that a corporation organizes to build teamwork.Today, think about what makes you "wildly enthusiastic" and write a scene where a character just plays. How does playing change your character? Playing increases creativity because it helps us let go of all of the rules. How would your writing change if you ignored the rules and just played with words? Now get back to work! (or take the day off and just play)
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag
Friday, August 7, 2009
Free to enter poetry contest from Franklin-Christoph
Don't miss out on this fine pen company's poetry contest you have until November 30th.
Thursday, August 6, 2009
All the Winners' Names

Monday, August 3, 2009
Writing...Just As It Should Be
And here's Grammar Rock for a reminder what is an adverb?
Whether or not you think using adverbs is "lazy writing" as many editors and craft books will tell you, it's a good idea to run your Word "find" feature for "ly" before you send in a completed piece of writing. Not that all adverbs should be banished but have you considered a stronger verb or if you are using excessive adverbs in dialogue tags, could you show that the person was angry rather than saying "Go away!" she said angrily.
Today take a look at how you use or overuse adverbs. How could you strengthen your writing by recognizing what words you overuse or fall back on? Twain continues his discussion of adverbs in this quote from Mark My Words: Mark Twain on Writing
I am dead to adverbs; they cannot excite me. To misplace an adverb is a thing which I am able to do with frozen indifference; it can never give me a pang. ... There are subtleties which I cannot master at all,--the confuse me, they mean absolutely nothing to me,--and this adverb plague is one of them. ... Yes, there are things which we cannot learn, and there is no use in fretting about it. I cannot learn adverbs; and what is more I won't.
Mark Twain "Reply to a Boston Girl," Atlantic Monthly, June 1880
Now get back to work!
Lovingly,
The Writing Nag
Sunday, August 2, 2009
WOOF Contest Winners
Poetry
Zorlone – “After Thought” - A poem of regret.
Dragon Blogger – “Sweet Songs of Youth” - Poem about childhood love and innocence.
Jennifer M Scott – “Among Lilac” - A poem of decisions.
About Writing / Creative Non-Fiction / Non-Fiction
Greg Freed – “Garden Part One” - A story about a man and his dog and a question about animal ethics.
Presenting the finest of the writer’s blogs by the bloggers who write them. Highlighting the top posts as chosen by the July 24, 2009 WOOF Contest participants. Want in to join the next WOOF? The next contest ends Aug 7. Submit a link to your best writing post of the last 3 weeks using the form on this page.
Other WOOF Contestants for 07/24/09
About Writing / Creative Non-Fiction / Non-Fiction
Writing Nag – “7 Questions for Creative Writing Accountability” - Are you achieving your writing goals? Why or Why Not? Questions to ask yourself and a freewriting prompt.
Greg Freed – “What we talk about when we talk about the economy” - Opens with a short essay about how we divide numbers from stories, so that it's "9.4% unemployment," not "Mr. Soandso, father for four and devoted husband for twenty years, got laid off." Moves into a narrative about how the economy is impacting my family, an attempt to reinject personal stories back into newsworthy topics.
Poetry
Jennifer M Scott – “Morning Minuet” - A poem of weird surrealism.
Saturday, August 1, 2009
August's Golden Crown
Ripening fields lush- bright with promise;
Summer waxes long, then wanes, quietly passing
Her fading green glory on to riotous Autumn."
Michelle L. Thieme, August's Crown
Poetry Contest for Garden Writers
Thanks to Lauri for the link!












